Hints
on Exercise A, Grade 12
The difference between Exercises
A and B hinges on clarity. The caveat on Exercise A is
that it is too broad in scope to enable truly coherent
execution. It asks for at least three things at once:
1) personal impressions of the reader (communication
standards) and 2) perspectives of characters in the play
(culture standards), and 3) analysis of a cultural
pattern from an outsider's perspective (comparison
standards).
In the first instance, students
will have to elaborate on their opinions and in the second,
they will be presenting not opinions but speculations ("Wenn
ich Beckmann wäre, würde ich eine neue Frau
finden"). Moreover, it will be hard for students to
know what or whom to speculate about. What is a
"personal perspective," or how does one "act" like other
people or, in the case of this prologue, like a river?
To eliminate confusion about the type of voice to assume
(part 1) and the covert demand for use of the subjunctive
(part 2), the task could be recast by asking instead that
students assume the roles of characters in the play.
Such a revision would involve changing the wording to "If
you were Beckmann, the Beerdigungsunternehmer, or
das Mädchen, what would your diary entry
be?" This revision introduces the idea of character
perspective without labeling it abstractly. Equally
important, it clarifies the student's role as impersonator
rather than interpreter of or speculator about character
behavior.
The third portion of this
question -- would the student act as these people do under
similar circumstances -- introduces the need for causal
logic in addition to subjunctive forms. By exploring
the potential similarities and differences in role
execution, it asks students to compare behaviors, since, as
part of the task in Exercise A, students must address the
question of "why" they would act in the same or different
fashion. To do so, they must use discourse markers
that often alter German word order in a variety of ways with
words such as "weil, darum, infolgedessen." Thus they
must not only use the subjunctive to assert "Wenn ich
Beckmann wäre, würde ich eine neue Frau suchen,"
they must also add the "why" with indicative clauses such as
"weil das Leben weitergeht."
To be sure, if the class is
specifically reviewing subjunctive forms, such a call for
speculation is appropriate. Demands for new verb forms AND
complex word order, however, are preferably sequenced rather
than asked for simultaneously. Thus, for example, a
Phase 4 assignment might eliminate the "why" to reduce this
cognitive overload. If students only needed to
speculate about how they would act in this situation, they
would not need to use the discourse markers to express why
they acted that way and, consequently, their linguistic load
would be considerably reduced.
In general, the success of a
writing or speaking task based on a reading assignment will
depend on a prior articulation of that task in matrix
format. Armed with that matrix of linguistic and
thematic information, a student's success in Phase 4 of the
average curricular sequence will depend on how many
additional linguistic or cognitive problems must be solved
in order to give a particular discursive focus to that
matrix. In the example above, asking students for a
role play in writing -- the diary entry as a specific person
in the text -- constitutes a reasonable expectation for
Phase 4. It also allows teachers to assign a Phase 5
assignment in which the "why" idea is introduced. Thus
the students can take a position in a text they create and
analyze why the individual they impersonated was indifferent
or caring or cruel toward Beckmann.
In sum, the key to success in
all of the examples above is the minimal step from that of a
neutral summarizer of content to that of a unambiguous voice
vis-à-vis the text. Such voices are encourage
with an assignment that asks students to use the language of
Draußen vor der Tür to convince others
about what the play says or does not say to them.