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Each of the two exercises
illustrates a different set of Standards (Exercise A
= connections, Exercise B =
comparisons). Exercise A asks students to focus
on verbal exchanges and, using the language of the text,
describe them in the third person. That cognitive task
involves sorting verbal exchanges by semantic type
(descriptions of appearance, descriptions of actions) and
then distinguishing syntactically between what people say
about themselves and what they say about other people.
The linguistic task for the students involves transposing
observations made in the first person to the third
person.
Exercise B reduces these tasks
linguistically, by focusing on only one speaker, but adds
another cognitive difficulty that is text-external:
transposing the concepts expressed by Borchert's Beckmann
into an American context. That cognitive task asks
students to construct that alternative context off the model
in Borchert's play. A more productive intermediate
step to introduce at this point would be that of having
students first reflect about the culture of the text,
in and of itself, before comparing its culture to another
one. Considering the cultural features of Germany
after WW II involves comprehending new concepts as well as
new vocabulary. Consequently, that very act of
reflection constitutes a challenging intermediate step
before students move on to comparing the unfamiliar with the
presumably more familiar American parallel.
The major imponderables in
Exercise B would be three. First, students would need
to have a fairly clear concept about the aftermath of WW II
in Germany as the basis for any comparison. Second,
students would need to generate the vocabulary for a
comparison with an American veteran from Desert Storm,
conditions involving textual language about different
physical problems, different appearance, and different
styles of relational difficulties. Since that
vocabulary is not available in Borchert's text, they would
need to be provided with a second, German language source
(such as a magazine article on Desert Storm and its
soldiers' experiences). Third, even if they understand
war, do they know enough about such large-scale military
engagements to draw meaningful comparisons?
Students will not consider some
of these hurdles to be serious, if some of the missing
material is treated elsewhere in their curriculum, even
outside the German class. If, for example, this lesson
were preceded by one that focuses on the culture of postwar
Germany (in a social studies or history class), they would
be readier to turn to a comparison. Therefore, it
would be helpful to coordinate a comparison lesson with work
in a social studies class dealing with contemporary issues
in America. In another case, the teacher would be
assisted in assigning Exercise B if the class itself had
particular interest in the topic due to, for example, its
proximity to an army base.
All of the above considerations
suggest that Exercise B, while potentially worthwhile if
undertaken under optimal learning conditions, poses
considerably greater cognitive and linguistic demands on
students than does Exercise A.
In sum, when students are just beginning to read an unfamiliar German text, we advise teachers to apply the initial sets of Standards and wait until their classes have progressed through more scenes in the play before introducing the comparison and communities standards, because these ask students to produce new language and new ideas based on an analysis of several kinds of texts -- the German text read in conjunction with supplementary materials provided by their teacher or in adjunct classes. A more productive sequence asks students to first reflect about the connections in and the culture of the text, in and of itself, before comparing its culture to another one.
EXERCISES A & B: Grade 12