TOPIC:  Explain how the text could be made more readable.  That is, specify how a specific kind of additional information would help orient a reader, e.g.:

     -how a picture or chart would offer information or vocabulary to clarify text topic or language (enhances redundancy or concreteness);

     -how a specific point of view imposed on a text would open its meaning for a specific reading group (how a text can be made age-appropriate or appropriate to a specific demongraphic group).
 

 FOLLOW-UP: Making Texts P & Q Readable